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>tsudzu-kete just preference, but I feel like I don't see many people romanize it with a d nowadays

But I can’t worry about that -> But I don't worry about that stuff

Let’s find our own treasures -> Maybe "Let's find what's important to us

My hands are overflowing -> Hands to arms

I want to face it all with a strong mind -> mind to heart

To keep protecting the precious things -> the precious things to "what's important to me

And do what I have to -> she speaks more slangy, how about "Gotta do what I have to!

Even in fictional stories -> maybe drop "fictional"

The strongest demon is right here -> Since she's oni sister, might be good just to leave it as oni

Failures lead to success -> Failure is the stepping stone to success
https://www.wordsense.eu/shippai_wa_seik%C5%8D_no_moto/

It’s too soon to lose heart, I can still do better -> maybe latter to "I can keep going

I’ll keep trying as many times as I need -> I'll face the challenge as many times as needed

Even if I want to escape, I have to hang tight 
Those are exactly the times when
-> It's times when I want to run
when I have to especially stand firm

I must do what I need to -> I gotta do this!

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