Talk:AkibaRanger 2 Episode 02

Error from version 1 (if you're planning to do a v2) :

• 8:09 - Some old lines are masking the new lines
• 9:33 - AkibaRed mentionned something about Ravioli, so I think it didn't turn into crap but Ravioli (and I think the singing from this scene sounds like Italian)
• 11:25 - The Katakana is writting as Meteo but it's actually Meteor (like Kamen Rider Meteor)
• 20:28 - AkibaBlue/Luna is actually asking a question, so it's more like "We had that kind of version?"
• 22:47 - Again, it's Meteor instead of Meteo
• 23:56 - If the "you" means KibaRanger, then it should be "Who is he?" since she was speaking to AkibaYellow
• 23:58 - The "Nope!" here sounds weak since KibaRanger was angry. I think "Like hell!" or something similar would work better

Response in QC

   8:09 - Some old lines are masking the new lines
   9:33 - AkibaRed mentionned something about Ravioli, so I think it didn't turn into crap but Ravioli (and I think the singing from this scene sounds like Italian)

I don't hear ravioli. I hear ryouri/cuisine. Does anyone else hear ravioli?

   11:25 - The Katakana is writting as Meteo but it's actually Meteor (like Kamen Rider Meteor)
   22:47 - Again, it's Meteor instead of Meteo

I guess my question is, why meteor cannon? The only possible reference that I get is from monster hunter: http://monsterhunter.wikia.com/wiki/Meteor_Cannon I guess it looks sort of similar? I agree that I prefer Meteo, but if it were a reference to this, it should be meteor

   20:28 - AkibaBlue/Luna is actually asking a question, so it's more like "We had that version of the roll call?"

Not really a correction, current version is fine?

   23:56 - If the "you" means KibaRanger, then it should be "Who is he?" since she was speaking to AkibaYellow

Oh, that's true. I would change this.

   23:58 - The "Nope!" here sounds weak since KibaRanger was angry. I think "Like hell!" or something similar would work better[/quote]

Sounds like a weird response to someone.