Talk:AkibaRanger 2 Episode 02: Difference between revisions

Revision as of 09:12, 27 April 2013

Error from version 1 (if you're planning to do a v2) :

8:09 - Some old lines are masking the new lines
9:33 - AkibaRed mentionned something about Ravioli, so I think it didn't turn into crap but Ravioli (and I think the singing from this scene sounds like Italian)
11:25 - The Katakana is writting as Meteo but it's actually Meteor (like Kamen Rider Meteor)
20:28 - AkibaBlue/Luna is actually asking a question, so it's more like "We had that version of the roll call?"
22:47 - Again, it's Meteor instead of Meteo
23:56 - If the "you" means KibaRanger, then it should be "Who is he?" since she was speaking to AkibaYellow
23:58 - The "Nope!" here seems weak since KibaRanger was angry. I think "Like hell!" would work better

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 *22:47 - Again, it's Meteor instead of Meteo
 *23:56 - If the "you" means KibaRanger, then it should be "Who is he?" since she was speaking to AkibaYellow
-*23:58 - The "Nope!" here seems weak since KibaRanger is angry. I think "Like hell!" would work better
+*23:58 - The "Nope!" here seems weak since KibaRanger was angry. I think "Like hell!" would work better